Count Down
BY ROBIN MORGAN
Survival is the final offer
that arrives at the eleventh hour
just when pain to the tenth power
would kill you with another ninth degree.
By then, relief strikes you brief as an eighth note;
you wear doom proudly; it's your seventh seal.
But life whispers through your sixth sense
of what might await you in some fifth dimension
where miracle is saved for the fourth quarter.
Tricked, you sigh and rise on the third day.
You know better, but with no second thought,
risk that first step—absurd as first love at first sight—
as if you were back at ground zero, as if it cost
nothing, as if this were not the last laugh.
The sonnet, a classical poem which has been “written in every era since the English Renaissance,” is set apart from all other poems. The uniformed, distinguished, and distinctive geometry of a sonnet allows for swift reorganization. With the capability to be so versatile the sonnet will by no means ever disappear. Thomas Foster stresses in this chapter how a “sonnet is the only poetic form the great majority of readers ever need to know.” Being able to recognize and understand a sonnet is the only category of poetry that someone who has not done any intensive study of poetry will need.
In Count Down, the sonnet’s apparent square shape is easily acknowledged. Consisting of the ordinary fourteen lines and using the typical iambic pentameter provides this sonnet with its square figure even though it does not look like it at first glance. The iambic pentameter is very apparent, especially in the last couplet of the poem, both lines consists of the 10 syllables. Holding the same format as a Shakespearean sonnet, Count Down is divided up by three quatrains, four lines, and an ending couplet one line. However this sonnet differs from regular Shakespearean sonnets holding a different rhyming scheme. Robin Morgan’s sonnet holds a more modern feel with a non existing rhyming scheme contrasting to the standard rhyming scheme of a Shakespearean sonnet, a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g. The unique count down in the sonnet gives it extra spunk, going from 11 to zero. This much thought inserted into the poem shows the unique attention, given to each number, that has provided while the sonnet was being constructed. Morgan carefully creates a sense of time running out with the countdown structure. Slowly moving down the number line in each line. She gives the sense of feeling that this is the end of existence for someone.